31st of May,

I was finally able to complete my essay and everything worked according to plan although I struggled at the last minutes. On thursday i was making some changes or improvements to the essay and complete the bibliography. I wasn't able to complete the bibliography because for some reasons the books I used all disappeared. The changes I made gave me about 20 extra words. I also deleted any repeated sentences or any ones with the same idea. I tried to use the way of saying something and then give evidence or a proof. I tried to be specific and general at the same time to keep it not too simple or too complicated. I think my essay is brief and to the point,well that is atleast what the students commented about or agreed. I also had to organise the bibliography in alphabetical order. Some of the bibliography didn't provide a name of the author or any other information so I tried to be as clear as I can. I think that my plan was a big help for me to complete my essay and try to make it as good as I can. I most of the time worked without distraction which was good and productively and pre-plannned. But I still think that I could've done better on my essay by making the organisation better. Most of the essay depended on the planning and whether or not I followed the steps of the plan. I also learned that in plan you need a solution for any twists or turns you might face while planning which I think that is very important, it is manly meant to be a backup plan, then you also need to have a backup for the backup plan, just to make sure and If you think that I am being sarcastic, well I'm not, I am serious, because of a lot students not having a backup plan, a lot of them needed extra days, almost 90% of the class, including me, and we all learned that the hard way. I am looking forward to get my essay back becaus eI didn't do my best but, I did good, I mean I could've done better but just a little more on organisation bur overall, the whole class did well.