25th of may,

Today I finished the editing inside the computer however, Mr.Sparks sujusted If we print it out, it will be much better so I printed it out and did a second editing where I found about eight mistakes or so which I didn't see in the computer editing. I am in my final stages of handing in the essay, I will have one more editing, maybe two if necessary. Since we are going to finish the essay on Thursday, I decided to do the bibliography as homework today (which I'm going to do after typing my reflection) and so in the other lessons I'll have time to finish, edit and improve my essay. What I did really good today, and I'm surpirsed is that I reviewed my essay and got new ideas of organizing it till the end of the lesson before the bell rings by two seconds I was about to say done. When we were getting close to the end I decided it would be good if I take out the uneeded words from my essay and, other adjectives. This helped me greatly to connect between the paragraphs. I think another reason of me catching up fast is that i had my information was summarized enough and I've put in the important information instead of every single piece of an article just to get a lot of notecards and show off ( yes it is true, I know some people who did it). This let me aviod a lot of troubles plenty of times because . So the strategy I used today was: reading others essay which I really couldn't do it and I will try to do it next lesson. What I realized as we are moving toward the end of the project is that I correct with choosing my strategy which made me organised. For instance my plan: It was to write the first paragraph of each characteristic and edit carefully so it can be easily connected to the second ones and then, after finishing one characteristic I edit it and make a bridge connection between the two characteristics. Also I was always carefu when typing my essay, and I went over my note cards to decide on what I need and what I don't need. I think I've done good which will hep me endure better or deveope in the future becaus ea what I'm doing now is an experience and it is all important in order for me to be succeful.