28th of May,

Today i got a little carried away and distracted most of the lesson. This caused me to complete very little today. And I was unable to follow my plan I devloped in the previous reflection because of me getting distracted. The main reason was some one asked me to read their essay and he/she was despert so I thought it was pity and I helped him/her. What i'm planning to do over the weekeneds is to finish the website bibliographies, then at school I can finish typing the bibliography from my note cards on sunday.I proofread my essay today, made changes and even asked some of the people in the class to read the essay breifly and give me their feedback on how to improve my essay. Some of them said I had unneccary words, which helped me take down my word limit. They tolde me that I had a very good structure and transition between characteristics however, there was a few grammer mistakes but, other than that, they all agreed that I have good organizition. I changed the structure and put in the Point, Evidence and the Analysis. I tried to put it in the important parts of the essay Once I did all these improvements, my essay looked pretty solid. I think the bibliography I'm going to make will need to be alphabetical and in the correct form because the bibliography is one of the important parts of the project so incase I have wrong information, I can always have something to back me up and defend my self, beside I think that I learned another thing from the essay apart of the organizition which is the bibliography, it is very important so you show to your reader that: you worked hard, you did not plagerize and incase he wants to write something it will be much easier for him. Sunday will be the day which I will try my best to put everything in and make a good essay for a good grade. (F.Y.I the person who asked me is unknown and it is a secret so yes, it s a he/she)