26th of may,

I worked well today and tried to put all my effort. But the information in my essay does not refer to the concept of time. Although my essay consists of plenty of useful information, I need to try to refer it to the concept of time as the essay is based on it. My essay on thursday will be printed out as a draft so I can read it over, discard and improve information. This should take me about 15-20 minutes if I work diligently. Since I lost the bibloigraphy, I emailed my self the links and did the bibliogarphy at home. This way my work amount is reduced and I just need to worry about finishing my essay and improving the information that needs improvement. Sometimes my information are explaining too much about the topic and ignore the time concept which I think is the main point of the whole essay so I have to really get the hang of it. Then I can type the improvements and look for transitions about how Time refers to the information. To make it easier for me to look for transitions refering to time, I think that I should come up with a guiding question because this will allow me to narrow down my search on any topic. That's what I learned about guiding questions, they narrow down your research and only allow you to take only the information important to you. The time concopt is really easy to use and I don't have to research it as long as I remmber the information in my text, I just hope that I don't mess it up and then stay on editing which will make me behind and maybe decrease my mark so, I will print it out, make the changes and then open a new word so incase I don't finish at time, I still have the old version and If I did finish on time then I would type it in. I think my plan was very easy to follow and I'm not regreted becasue, I'm with the schdule we were timed to. Another thing I used in this project is the method of ignoring the idea of writing unnecesary information which is a waste of time and also too complicated to understand so I wrote a few bullet points with the right information,to make it easier for me to wrote it down. I put in the right information and made it very brief, yes I did have a little bit amount of cards but, it was expand able so I had a lot or fairly good amount of information to talk about. I had a brief plan which also helped me to finish my essay.