21st May,

I finally finished my essay as my goal was to. I have roughly 1385 words and so does most of the class. Today once I finished, I realized that my essay was reallywell done. My paragraphs were fairly organized. The time periods in which every event happened in the paragraph were in the right order as I also doubled check as a backup. For example Hammurabi code was before Shulgi which is the other way and it was the only one I messed up with. I also accidentaly mixed up the information of sumerian with that abylon. I changed some phrases, made them longer, shorter or more specific. I also improved the sentences using more examples and I also tried my best for each paragraph to show how each characteristic interacted with the concept of Time. I tried to show how as time went by what devlopments the civilization made, etc. Pausing every paragraph or two and going back to the text kept me behind at the begining, people had 100 word and I had 500 but, now people are stuck at the word count 1300 and they are trying to rephrase and improve whereas me, I am almost 1400 and I will probably finish checking my essay by monday If we have any more time. I also have to stay aware and not jumble up any information as I did today in changing the orders of the text. I also stayed aware of the idea of writting a sentence andthen giving a proof example: Religion was important, it was used in everything, because the civilization believed that the god won't bless them without their permission. So as you can see I gave a statnment and then proved it.